I will read your manuscript, paying careful attention to areas such as plot, pacing, coherence of world-building, and character arcs and motivations. I will provide you with a detailed written report, with the option to discuss this further over a 30-minute video call.
I will not copy-edit or proofread your work for errors. However, I will offer you some generalised feedback if there are any regularly occurring errors of spelling, grammar, and punctuation, or overly repeated words and phrases.
You will receive:
a detailed written report, outlining the strengths of your manuscript and suggesting areas for further development
a 30-minute video call to discuss your manuscript and my suggestions.
A good option if you’re having trouble with a particular section of your novel. Send me the extract, together with a summary of any relevant background information and plot context (up to 1000 words) and any details about what you feel isn’t currently working.
You will receive:
a written report outlining the strengths of the work I have seen, areas for further development and, if relevant, suggesting some ‘fixes’ for the issues you have flagged
a 30-minute video call to discuss your extract and my suggestions.
Send me the outline of your novel – either a synopsis or a chapter-by-chapter summary – including any relevant notes on world-building and character background (up to 5000 words in total). I will provide feedback on elements such as character arcs and motivations; the overall ‘shape’ of your plot; world-building coherence; and potential pacing issues.
This kind of feedback is particularly beneficial in the early stages of writing your novel. If you are a ‘plotter’ you will likely already have created a detailed plan before you even sit down to write your first chapter, so this would be a good stage to get some feedback. If you are more of a ‘discovery writer’ then it would probably be more useful to do this once your first draft is completed.
Depending on the package you purchase, you will receive:
a written report of my feedback and suggestions
a 30- or 60-minute video call to discuss feedback, brainstorm ideas and plan your next steps.
Send me some sample chapters or scenes of your novel and I will carry out a detailed copy-edit, allowing you to see where your most common errors tend to occur and thus giving you specific areas of focus for your line edits. This is an excellent option if you are happy with your plot and characters, but are not sure where to start when it comes to the more detailed levels of editing. Any errors or ‘stylistic glitches’ you make in the extracts I read are likely to be repeated elsewhere, so this is a good way to get some insight into those and further polish your personal writing style. For this reason, I would encourage you to send me sections that you are less happy with, particularly if you can’t quite work out the reasons for it. You can send me one continuous extract of your work, or two or three shorter scenes, together with up to 500 words of contextual information.
I will read your work carefully for:
errors of spelling, grammar and punctuation
clarity and sense
consistency of style and voice
words or phrases that you unconsciously overuse.
I will NOT offer any feedback on content, unless there is an issue with continuity or factual errors that the average reader would be likely to notice.
You will receive:
a corrected version of your work with the changes tracked, and any points for clarification or suggestions for rewording made as comments
a brief written report summarising any areas that it might be useful for you to focus on in your own line edits and, where appropriate, pointing you towards further resources.
under 5000: £140
5000-9,999: £210
10,000-19,999: £245
20,000-29,999: £315
30,000-39,999: £350
40,000-49,999: £385
50,000-59,999: £420
60,000-69,999: £455
70,000-79,999: £525
80,000-89,999: £560
90,000-99,999: £630
100,000-109,999: £665
110,000-119,999: £735
120,000-129,999: £770
130,000-139,999: £840
140,000-149,999: £875
For projects of 150,000 or more, there is an additional charge of £5 per 1000 words.
Verbal feedback via 30-minute video call: £70
Verbal feedback via 60-minute video call: £90
Written report and 30-minute video call: £120
Written report and 60-minute video call: £140
3000 words: £140
5000 words: £230